Response to Beth Taylor's unit 1 assignment

Hey! For the most part I have nothing bad to say. I love the way that you drew the audience in and captured our attention right away by describing the airplane and who was one it. It makes it easier to really picture what is around you, and anyone who has flown before would have no problem picturing the scene you described. The reactions to the announcement where also stated very openly and honestly. The thoughts that these passengers must have had are terrifying to think about and you portrayed them very nicely, as well as staying true to the actual news story. The only part that I felt was a little off was the last paragraph. When reading it, I felt the blog was at a good ending point with the second to last paragraph and that the last paragraph was a little detached. Otherwise I think it was an excellent story!